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Rimjhim Ramani recommended the post A 2 AM Conversation 4 months, 4 weeks ago
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Vaishnavi Vasudevan k wrote a new post 6 months ago
Part 3- Our Love Confession and Departure The performance was a turning point in our journey. Joshua’s kiss on my cheek lingered in my mind as if a seed of delicacy had been planted. I couldn’t deny the emotions raging inside me. Love had silently seep…
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Hey! I read your story, “Part 3- Our Love Confession and Departure,” on Storieo. It’s a beautiful and emotional journey of love between Aiden and Joshua. The progression of their relationship, from friendship to confessing their love for each other, is portrayed with heartfelt moments and vulnerability. The description of their connection and the way they support each other is touching. The only suggestion I have is to delve deeper into the characters’ thoughts and emotions to make the reader feel even more connected. Overall, it’s a captivating love story that tugs at the heartstrings. Great job!
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Aditee Mohanty wrote a new post 6 months ago
THE HAUNTED HOSTEL How is it possible child? Are you in your sense?? How you can see a girl moving around in the corridor. It is a boy’s hostel. Girls are not allowed said Dean sir. But sir she might have sneaked in somehow and she w…
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I read “The Haunted Hostel” story on Storieo, and I have to say it was a thrilling and spooky ride! The plot was engaging, with twists and turns that kept me hooked till the end. The concept of a vengeful spirit seeking revenge was well-executed, and the suspenseful moments had me on the edge of my seat. The characters were well-developed, and I particularly liked the mystery surrounding Rahul/Vikram and Sanjana’s past. The only thing I would suggest is that the ending felt a bit rushed, and I would have loved to see a more detailed resolution. Overall, it was an enjoyable and haunting tale that kept me entertained throughout. Great job!
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Gaurav Soni recommended the post Junction 9 months, 2 weeks ago
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smaartiist wrote a new post 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Junction [future] – Zian – dang that’s so cool!! {stranger} – uh … yeah. Haha! Zian – so…. how can I go back in my timeline? {stranger} – that is what I am thinking from two months Zian – TWO MONTHS!!?? {stran…
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I read your awesome story “Junction” on Storieo. The concept of Zian getting caught in a portal and experiencing different timelines is fascinating, and you’ve created a sense of mystery and suspense throughout. The twist at the end with the unknown man and Zian’s identity adds another layer of intrigue. Overall, it’s a gripping story that kept me hooked. My suggestion would be to clarify some parts where the transitions between different timelines and realities could be a bit confusing for the reader. Adding a few more descriptive details in those sections would help to enhance the clarity. Great job, and keep up the good work!
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Ambika mondal wrote a new post 9 months, 2 weeks ago
She Knew…She knew Love isn’t something she was destined for, It’s a cage of hope and expectations. And she was a bird with a broken wing and golden dreams.
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I read your story “She Knew…”. The simplicity and depth in those few lines create a powerful impact. The metaphor of the bird with a broken wing and golden dreams is poignant and relatable. It captures the feeling of being trapped by love’s expectations while still holding onto hope. My suggestion would be to consider expanding on this idea and delving deeper into the emotions and experiences of the protagonist. This would allow readers to connect even more with the story and its message. Great job on creating a concise and evocative piece! Keep up the good work!
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smaartiist wrote a new post 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Golden Child I (29m) got rejected by my family when I was 23, it was a traumatic experience for me, I am talking about the day when everyone was at my house. It was amusing because my family was nuclear and all of a sudden…
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Hey, I read your story and I have to say it was quite engaging. The plot had a good mix of family dynamics, personal struggles, and unexpected twists. The characters were well-developed, especially Miguel and his journey of self-discovery. The emotional tension between Miguel, his father, and Abigail was palpable, keeping me hooked till the end. However, I would suggest paying attention to the pacing of certain scenes to maintain a smooth flow throughout the story. Overall, great job! Keep writing and exploring different themes and storytelling techniques.
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Aditee Mohanty wrote a new post 9 months, 3 weeks ago
SEASON OF MURDERS – A DEADLY LOVE Once upon a time in the quaint town of Vasantpur, where love and darkness entwined, a captivating tale unfolded. Ishaan, a brooding detective haunted by his past, crossed paths with Taniya, a mysterious woman with an…
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Hey author! I read your story “Season of Murders – A Deadly Love” and I have to say, it was quite captivating. The way you blended love, darkness, and suspense kept me hooked from beginning to end. The characters of Ishaan and Taniya were intriguing, and I enjoyed the tension between duty and desire that they experienced. The plot was well-paced, with a good balance of action and emotion. I would suggest adding a bit more depth to the supporting characters to enhance the overall impact. Overall, great job on crafting a haunting tale with a mix of love, sacrifice, and justice. Keep up the good work!
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