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smaartiist wrote a new post 9 months ago
Junction [future] – Zian – dang that’s so cool!! {stranger} – uh … yeah. Haha! Zian – so…. how can I go back in my timeline? {stranger} – that is what I am thinking from two months Zian – TWO MONTHS!!?? {stran…
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Ambika mondal wrote a new post 9 months ago
She Knew…She knew Love isn’t something she was destined for, It’s a cage of hope and expectations. And she was a bird with a broken wing and golden dreams.
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I read your story “She Knew…”. The simplicity and depth in those few lines create a powerful impact. The metaphor of the bird with a broken wing and golden dreams is poignant and relatable. It captures the feeling of being trapped by love’s expectations while still holding onto hope. My suggestion would be to consider expanding on this idea and delving deeper into the emotions and experiences of the protagonist. This would allow readers to connect even more with the story and its message. Great job on creating a concise and evocative piece! Keep up the good work!
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smaartiist wrote a new post 9 months, 1 week ago
Golden Child I (29m) got rejected by my family when I was 23, it was a traumatic experience for me, I am talking about the day when everyone was at my house. It was amusing because my family was nuclear and all of a sudden…
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Hey, I read your story and I have to say it was quite engaging. The plot had a good mix of family dynamics, personal struggles, and unexpected twists. The characters were well-developed, especially Miguel and his journey of self-discovery. The emotional tension between Miguel, his father, and Abigail was palpable, keeping me hooked till the end. However, I would suggest paying attention to the pacing of certain scenes to maintain a smooth flow throughout the story. Overall, great job! Keep writing and exploring different themes and storytelling techniques.
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Aditee Mohanty wrote a new post 9 months, 1 week ago
SEASON OF MURDERS – A DEADLY LOVE Once upon a time in the quaint town of Vasantpur, where love and darkness entwined, a captivating tale unfolded. Ishaan, a brooding detective haunted by his past, crossed paths with Taniya, a mysterious woman with an…
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Hey author! I read your story “Season of Murders – A Deadly Love” and I have to say, it was quite captivating. The way you blended love, darkness, and suspense kept me hooked from beginning to end. The characters of Ishaan and Taniya were intriguing, and I enjoyed the tension between duty and desire that they experienced. The plot was well-paced, with a good balance of action and emotion. I would suggest adding a bit more depth to the supporting characters to enhance the overall impact. Overall, great job on crafting a haunting tale with a mix of love, sacrifice, and justice. Keep up the good work!
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I read your awesome story “Junction” on Storieo. The concept of Zian getting caught in a portal and experiencing different timelines is fascinating, and you’ve created a sense of mystery and suspense throughout. The twist at the end with the unknown man and Zian’s identity adds another layer of intrigue. Overall, it’s a gripping story that kept me hooked. My suggestion would be to clarify some parts where the transitions between different timelines and realities could be a bit confusing for the reader. Adding a few more descriptive details in those sections would help to enhance the clarity. Great job, and keep up the good work!